From 50c16e5b150e7df0b491f4803c022a7a8c39d6ec Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Alexandre KARIM Date: Sat, 26 Dec 2020 15:34:54 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] Update doc --- doc/sources/admin/download.rst | 16 ++++++++-------- doc/sources/admin/features.rst | 18 +++++++++--------- doc/sources/admin/quickstart.rst | 11 ++++++++--- 3 files changed, 25 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/sources/admin/download.rst b/doc/sources/admin/download.rst index 99e2fcac2..624ea799c 100644 --- a/doc/sources/admin/download.rst +++ b/doc/sources/admin/download.rst @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ Release notes ------------- Release notes for latest version: -https://projects.ow2.org/view/lemonldap-ng/lemonldap-ng-2-0-8-is-out/ +https://projects.ow2.org/view/lemonldap-ng/lemonldap-ng-2-0-9-is-out Go on https://projects.ow2.org/bin/view/lemonldap-ng/ for older versions. @@ -15,13 +15,13 @@ See also :doc:`upgrade notes`. Packages and archives --------------------- -Stable version (2.0.8) +Stable version (2.0.9) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Tarball ^^^^^^^ -- `Tarball `__ +- `Tarball `__ RPM ^^^ @@ -38,17 +38,17 @@ RHEL/CentOS 7 ''''''''''''' - `RPM - bundle `__ + bundle `__ - `Source - RPM `__ + RPM `__ RHEL/CentOS 8 ''''''''''''' - `RPM - bundle `__ + bundle `__ - `Source - RPM `__ + RPM `__ Debian ^^^^^^ @@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ Debian - `DEB - bundle `__ + bundle `__ Docker ^^^^^^ diff --git a/doc/sources/admin/features.rst b/doc/sources/admin/features.rst index e17706d99..5427e5410 100644 --- a/doc/sources/admin/features.rst +++ b/doc/sources/admin/features.rst @@ -14,13 +14,13 @@ LL::NG is designed using `Model–View–Controller software architecture `__, so you just have to :doc:`change HTML/CSS files` to -custom portal. +customize the portal. Easy to integrate ----------------- :doc:`Integrating applications` in -LL::NG is easy since its dialog with applications is based on +LL::NG is easy since its dialogue with applications is based on :ref:`customizable HTTP headers`. Unifying authentications (Identity Federation) @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ heterogeneous architecture. LL:NG can be set as Identity provider, Service Provider or Protocol Proxy (:doc:`LL::NG as federation protocol proxy`). -Its SOAP API can also be used to dialog directly with your custom +Its SOAP API can also be used to dialogue directly with your custom applications. Sessions @@ -48,9 +48,9 @@ opened sessions: - by users - by IP *(IPv4 and IPv6)* -- by date - by double IP (sessions opened by the same user from multiple computers) +- by date It can be used to delete a session @@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ Session restrictions By default, a user can open several :doc:`sessions`. LL::NG can restrict -this: +the following: - Allow only one session per user - Allow only one IP address per user @@ -78,11 +78,11 @@ LL::NG can be configured to provides - one secured (SSL only) for sensitive applications - one unsecured for other applications -So if the http cookie is stolen, sensitive applications stay secured. +So that if the http cookie is stolen, sensitive applications remain secured. Notifications ------------- -LL::NG can be used to prompt users with a message. This can be used to -notify right changes,... See -:doc:`notifications` for more. +LL::NG can be used to notify users with a message when authenticating. This can be used to +inform of a change in access rights, the publication of a new IT charter, etc. (See +:doc:`notifications` for more details) diff --git a/doc/sources/admin/quickstart.rst b/doc/sources/admin/quickstart.rst index 554a5b6f5..a49ce3439 100644 --- a/doc/sources/admin/quickstart.rst +++ b/doc/sources/admin/quickstart.rst @@ -69,14 +69,15 @@ or change it, for example for ``mydomain.com``: /etc/apache2/sites-available/* In order to be able to test, update your DNS or your local ``hosts`` -file to map this names to the SSO server IP: +file to map these names to the SSO server IP: - auth.mydomain.com - manager.mydomain.com - test1.mydomain.com - test2.mydomain.com -For example on your local computer (adjust your server IP and test domain) +For example, you can enter the following command on your local computer: +(adjust according to your server IP and test domain) :: @@ -87,7 +88,11 @@ For example on your local computer (adjust your server IP and test domain) Using nip.io (or other DNS wildcard services) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ -If you cannot edit /etc/hosts or your DNS zone, don't give up yet, you can use services such as http://nip.io, http://xip.io, https://sslip.io/, or others. +If you cannot edit /etc/hosts or your DNS zone, don't give up yet, you can use services such as `nip.io`_, `xip.io`_, `sslip.io`_ or others. + +.. _nip.io: http://nip.io/ +.. _xip.io: http://xip.io/ +.. _sslip.io: https://sslip.io For example, if your server IP is 192.168.12.13, you can use 192-168-12-13.nip.io as your SSO domain: